| Good paper. I just had my partner read it (a sociology professor) and he had two comments (though he said it was a good paper). He questioned the validity of using Barbara Boxer's report, as she's a well-known Democrat with an agenda - and whether or not Dave Ramsey also is reporting with an agenda. Also, he brought up that if Social Security was privatized there would be many millions of people who just didn't know what to do - or how to follow any kind of plan for investment. When I pointed out that your final statement included "the option to invest," he said that perhaps the final statement/sentence might be broken up. As he put it, LOL, 'the final sentence is quite a mouthful and it's easy to overlook that caveat at the end."
But, good work. It's always good to see young people who will do the work and not just rely on their opinions. | 
